Oral presentacion

I've done my presentacion about marriage discriminations, it is a popular topic a lot of people discriminate others for this reason.

My presentacion was not so good because I was very nervious so I did not finish it all. I 've recorded me doing the presentacion how it had to be but I can't hang it on the blog, tomorrow I will try another time.

Well I will do my self evaluacion about the presentacion I 've done in class, it was no so good I was too nervious.

-Presentacion: I've used powerpoint, images, a video, I've serched interesting things...
-Body language & eye contact: I weren't looking to the audiance because I can't do it at that moment, I was collapsed and I only wanted to finish it and go away. I think I didn't read a lot but my tone was like if I was afraid.
-Structure: The structure of the project was good, first I explain a little bit about discriminacions and then I spacific about marriage discriminacions, I talk about some curiousities, I put a video and then I must to do a conclusion and tell more about how can be respect it, because it is bad seen and some other facts.
-Content: How I saied before I love talking about curiosities, because I think that it is a thing that no body get borred about it.
-Language: In the part what I've done the grammar was correct I think, the vocabulary too.
-Pronunciation & Intonation: My pronunciation was good, but the intonation was very bad I think, my voice trembled and I spoke very low.

Self- Evaluation of your oral presentation

1.-
Presentation: 8; I think that the power point is very well structured, there are a lot of photos and any text, we say it all with memory folowing the pictures.
Body lenguage & eye contact: 8; I am looking the most of the time to the public, but sometimes I looked to my notes, not very often.
Structure: 5; We didn't very well de cronological structure.
Content: 35; I thing that I really introduce new informacion to de public and the information was simple and comprehensible, but I didn't show any examples.
Language: 15;How I'll can saw in the video my vocabulary was rich and there was a lot of varied linkers.
Pronunciacion and introducion: 0'8; I'll now how pronounce the majority of the words, but I was a litttle bit nervious and I'll have one or two interrumpions.
Self-Evaluation: MARK: 71.8

2.-
I thing that it was a good presentation, there can improve thing allways.
I like my pronuncacion how it sounds but I thing that it was horrible that I was nervious because that can be seen in my face!